Hi bloggers.
In class I have been writing a report about hedgehogs because I like the spikes on a Hedgehogs because they can protect themselves.
First I planned my big idea. Then I searched the information I needed. Then I wrote each paragraph about each new idea.
Please read my report and leave me a comment.
hi abdullah you must like heghogs
ReplyDeleteHi Abdullah I like your report about hedgehogs. I like the way that you wrote a lot of sentences. I'd like to see some more sentences about where they live.
ReplyDeletekia ora Abdullah My name is Marcus. I loved your report. It reminded me of when I sore a dead hedgehog. Maybe next time you can use different sentence beginnings. What got you interested in hedgehogs? Can't wait until the next time you post something.
ReplyDeleteHi Abdullah its me Tui. I like your report and keep the good work up.
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